Tuesday, December 15, 2009

Body in the baptistery question 4

What if anything do you wish the author had done different?

3 comments:

  1. At times it felt the theological anthems were so above board as to be too direct for the storyline. On the other hand that is the genre, so I really wouldn;t change this aspect.

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  2. sometimes there was a generational gap I think that might isolate younger readers. such as phrases like "Good riddance to bad rubbish" probably reads normal to older but not younger readers

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